tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25210498.post116779835033664427..comments2023-10-14T06:27:54.481-06:00Comments on The Art of Observation: Random Sonnet!A.J.http://www.blogger.com/profile/00372981482882320883noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25210498.post-1167800619693822912007-01-02T22:03:00.000-07:002007-01-02T22:03:00.000-07:00Good one, Amanda! The first part of it seems a li...Good one, Amanda! The first part of it seems a little repetitious though, maybe you might want to use that space to elaborate on the beauty of the name, or the way if flowed off the tongue so freely, or something. Also, you may want to separate it into the "abab cdcd dede ff" scheme like so: (might make it a tad more readable)<BR/><BR/>a<BR/>b<BR/>a<BR/>b<BR/><BR/>c<BR/>d<BR/>c<BR/>d<BR/><BR/>e<BR/>f<BR/>e<BR/>f<BR/><BR/>g<BR/>g<BR/><BR/>At any rate, good job! Great idea for a poem!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25210498.post-1167799546077411522007-01-02T21:45:00.000-07:002007-01-02T21:45:00.000-07:00That's good.That's good.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com